Oh, my goodness! I'm glad that Lily was safe. I'm a big fan of this sort of POV piece. One of the most important parts about storytelling is figuring out from which perspective to tell the story, and I think this was much stronger than if you'd told it from the girl's POV.
(I'm going back and commenting on some of my faves from last week before starting to read this week's entries.)
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Date: 2022-05-10 09:50 pm (UTC)(I'm going back and commenting on some of my faves from last week before starting to read this week's entries.)